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    dots Submission Name: My Anti-Drugdots

    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Prose/Passion
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    dotsMy Anti-Drugdots

    Poetry is my expression of creativity,
    That helps me best get out my feelings without them being downed or judged,
    I don't show them to hardly anyone in fear of others negative critique of my work which i think is great,
    I need inspiration and motivation to continue presuing this gift God has given me that at times i feel i've lost due to the lack of use,
    It soothes, relaxes, and calms me just to know that no matter what i write it comes out of the gift that i have,
    Even though sometimes i boast on how good of a poet i myself feel i am because of how my words seem to flow and go together,
    By me using my talent it helps me build up my confidence and know that i can be the greatest poet in my world that i could possibly be with God on my side,
    Loving to experience every occasion through paper instead of spoken word,
    Thats how i choose to view this world this passion to me only by Jesus Christ above,
    Who is now and forever my sovereign God.

    Submitted on 2005-05-23 15:34:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'd have to agree with lynn about the grammar, but I mess up alot too . Overall a great write in terms of expressing your love for jesus. For those of you wondering im not religious :P
    Big bill-
    | Posted on 2005-05-24 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]
      I love how you express your feelings about your
    gift and about God. I've went back and read
    some of your eariler poems and they are very good. I do think that your grammer and form needs to be worked on to make it easier for your reader to read. I also write poetry about God and understand the enormious power that he can bring to the pen. He has given you a gift so never give up on it.
    | Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmm... not a very common theme at this place, as far as I have read...

    Though we are much alike on some levels, we are far apart on our motives for writing. It seems to be a very uplifting experience for you.

    On the other hand, it was a very positive poem... I would reword a little, to make it flow better, and perhaps try to show more description of the emotions that writing gives you.
    | Posted on 2005-06-16 00:00:00 | by Ata_Khai | [ Reply to This ]
      This was amazing. Such a rant, yet so powerful! You really made me just focus on this piece. The way you expressed yourself and your feelings...that really touched me as well. You can be everything and then some. With God by your side...there is nothing else that should matter. He will guide you as close to perfection as he can.

    Loved this lil C.

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-08-22 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]

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