"shivering stars and trembling rainbows" that's really freaking brilliant. I liked this cuz no matter who is reading it, they can each pick their own meanings and interpretations. That makes a good poem in my mind. keep em comin
Hmmmm...let me see. I have to say that this is a write that has no questions but is enlightening the idea of opposite things. I got no "feeling" from this though because of the fact that it went back and forth so much that I figured that you have written a write that is the form of a black hole in words, because it sucked my thoughts away. Nicely done. I think??? Hee-hee. Have a good one.