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    dots Submission Name: Reflectionsdots
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    Author: sug90
    ASL Info:    14/F/U.S.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 69/93/34
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 240
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 551



    Description:
       I know this is cliché but I have been having htis really bad streak with my writing so it is the best I have... tell me how to improve it plz.


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    dotsReflectionsdots
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    I gazed upon a pair of friends today
    Who had some wrinkles and some age
    But between them there was radiance
    Of two lives lived, in harmony
    And I stared in wonder, for my years are few
    Slowly I realized, we are just like these two
    We’ve laughed and giggled,
    Told our triumphs and fears
    Nothing can tear us apart
    Not miles or years
    What are best friends for
    If not to be there
    When the distance in between you
    Seems impossibly too far?






    Submitted on 2005-05-23 23:07:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really liked htis and i hope to read more of your work soon. i'm glad to find people who actually have friend. someone you hasn't been through life the way others have where they lose all trust for people. its good to see someone like you still exsisting in the world. i'm glad.
    love
    tina
    | Posted on 2005-05-24 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is lovely, nothing better than grow old with your best friends, having shared the ups and downs of life :)

    I gazed upon a pair of friends today
    Who had some wrinkles and some age
    But between them there was radiance
    Of two lives lived, in harmony

    lovely indeed :)
    | Posted on 2005-05-24 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]



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