The Depths Of My Heart by Ace

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Submission Name: The Depths Of My Heart dots

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Author:	Ace
ASL Info:	17/m/In Hell
Elite Ratio:	4.1 - 305/337/56
Words:	95

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	445
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	584

Description:
This for mesa moose and she better like it j/k
you know i loves yeah

The Depths Of My Heart dots

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Torn whole
Ripped ragged
The depths of my heart
Tragic, and jagged
Frantic as I look for a new
I look your way
I love you
My love is so shallow
My pain so deep
Quickly hug me
Kiss me sweet
You’re my joy
I’m your pride
Love me hard
Hate me light
I’m not your boy
Not just a toy
Just the man you can
Enjoy
I’ve been down
On the highest day
Don’t hurt me
Make love not dismay
Love me the now
The right way

Submitted on 2005-05-24 11:07:04 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Really well written
This write really created powerful imagery
I also like how you stressed the theme in this write
Letting it carry this write perfectly and with an even flow
Nice Work
Your Friend
Ron

And Thank You for the recent comments
I am happy you enjoy my writes and know I enjoy yours just as much
Take Care
Ron
| Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  the biggest compliement i have yet to give.But your the first to hear it.And it is tru.I hung on to every word you said in this poem.Your poems are delightful to read.always personal with a twist.i see that you have a optomistic life.which is good to hear.I will enjoy reading more of your poertry.this poem is superb.
10 outta 5
| Posted on 2005-05-27 00:00:00 | by Rainin_Raspbery | [ Reply to This ]
  This was a sweet piece. I'm sure the gal will love it. However, there was nothing in here spectacular to make it a standout piece. Give the readers something to remember in every piece. Something that will make them stop and read it again...Nice job though.

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| Posted on 2005-05-24 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
  I'm first in line to kick them in the head before Dev, hope you know. I'm at work using the computer, hehe no one will ever know. Gonna miss you this week. Lovin the poem. I'ma mail you yours with the long letter you want. Soon as you get here there will be a hug and a kiss waiting no worries. Lovin the new poem lots and lots with checkers, french fries, frosties, and red bows. My little black heart is waiting.

Loves
Blessed Be!
| Posted on 2005-05-24 00:00:00 | by Sarah Leger | [ Reply to This ]
  awwwwwww this is soooo sweet! I love this. Whos torn out your heart? Tell me so I can go over there and beat their ass! lol Me really liked this...Im making it a new favorite!

Love from Within
| Posted on 2005-05-24 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]

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