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    dots Submission Name: Wonder of a Sleeping Wolfchilddots
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    Author: Transcendancing
    Elite Ratio:    5.13 - 365/214/35
    Words: 243
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       A child I love, a child I rocked and held, even though I can do so no longer, I still remember him dearly, him and his father both. Remeniscent of a very special time in my life.


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    dotsWonder of a Sleeping Wolfchilddots
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    Twilight is ebbing, fading to dark
    Daylight long since snoozing
    Little wolf child fighting sleep,
    His incessant idle chatter, and
    Continued boisterous bouncing
    Are his weapons wielded skillfully…

    Eventually the chimes strike
    With weapons discarded
    The real battle begins…

    Howling loudly, denying his need to sleep
    The child screams and kicks,
    Pleading and crying, demanding and yelling
    Though mercy is not his

    Tucked up tight, cuddled close
    Our own war tactics
    Beginning to gain precious ground,
    Stories and fantasies woven through the dark
    Spoken by a lullaby soothing voice

    The night is soft and filled with sorrow
    Though the sorrow is calmer now
    Not violent with wild cries and furious screams.
    Of a battle fought and lost…

    As his moon friends bid him
    ‘Sweet dreams and good night’
    The wolf child’s eyes close softly
    Relinquishing hold on today, he sighs
    We smile and watch in wonder
    Few sights as amazing to behold
    The wonder of a sleeping child

    The night is quiet and in my arms a child sleeps,
    Succumbing finally to exhaustion.
    Though painful it was to hear his cries,
    Feel his rage echo through out the house,
    The balance is restored and as he sleeps
    I am overwhelmed with love.




    Submitted on 2004-04-07 02:46:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ah, the beauty of a sleeping child. this is really a very beautifully written piece. it is filled with the love you obviously feel for this child. to hear his cries is painful to you, so you weave your stories and fantasies, which eventually calm his dissent. i work with pre-schoolers, and some will fight naptime.. i'll lay down and rub his or her back, sometimes cooing or singing softly...
    wonderful poem! a new fav.
    | Posted on 2004-08-05 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't find this "scarey" at all, --having raised 5 kids and still lulling to sleep at times various grandchildren--I know exactly what you are saying. You did a great job of presenting the "stormy" part. the child's resistance--then the loving way he is lulled to sleep...by "Stories and fantasies woven through the dark "--( I really liked that line--because it describes perfectly that special time of closeness, when the parent is telling stories in the dark--gently, evenly, softly---and those dear little eyes are getting ever so heavy with sleep. Good One, silver
    | Posted on 2004-08-04 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
      but in a good way, the title just made me HAVE to read it and I just got an uneasy feeling reading it but it's really good, beautiful and unsettling.
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by joe quinn | [ Reply to This ]
      the poem is scary due to the dreams of the chlid the parents/u cannot really control what the child sees and its disconcerting to me that a child should scream and wail while he is sleeping the dark overtones really bring in the images of a fear unknown
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by whyme | [ Reply to This ]
      Amazing tribute to parenthood. I love the way you captured the awe and wonder of children, and their wildness...

    ~ Niphredil
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by Niphredil | [ Reply to This ]



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