nice written, you are good at writing short, meaningful poems, I like it, although I would like it even more if it contained some mystery, like a puzzle... it would left me "all the space to colour up" like Suzanne Vega said, it would make more room for interpretation.
you don't need rhyme. it's good as it is. very nice description of love. but is 'environ' meant to be 'enviroment'?? you know I'm german and I looked in my dictionary cause it could be a english word I don't know but I only found 'enviroment' or 'environs' (only plural). sorry but this time I point out the spelling mistakes.