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    dots Submission Name: Flower of Existencedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 662
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 352



    Description:
       A river piece.

    i broke my right arm and am having a heck of a time writing/typing with my left hand & this came 2 me & since i've had X problems w/either!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!


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    dotsFlower of Existencedots
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    I am the bud
    of God...
    Flower of Existence

    I am the wave
    of Life...
    River of Eternity

    I am the speck
    of sand...
    Beach of Expression

    I am the song
    of nature...
    Symphony of Everything

    I am the smile
    of all...
    Joy of Epiphany




    Submitted on 2005-05-24 13:02:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Tiffany this is really lovely.. and I like the way you have each "expression" beginning with an "E" and still pulling off such a good write. Each stanza fits so perfectly.. with the bud/flower, wave/river, sand/beach, etc.
    And it's a feel good poem... so I like :)
    Very nicely done!
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-05-26 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      :) Sorry about your arm :(...But hey, like you said, now you can be am-be-dex-tur-isss :)...At least you didn't break your leg! that would be worst eH? :) Anyway have, good write :)

    STw
    | Posted on 2005-05-24 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiff, I'm speechless...it's like somebody else writing this, cos there's no Tiffspeak.
    And lucky, cos I don't think this needs it, it's remarkably lovely as it is, and needs no baubles and bangles to show me its beauty.
    Simply excellent.
    Be Happy
    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-05-24 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      Woah... This is Amazing! I love this. I cant find anything i would change about this. I simply love this poem. Its breath taking. The use of simple words in the exactly correct spot to create a message that expels a thousand words. Perfection.
    | Posted on 2005-06-11 00:00:00 | by Di Re Rakord | [ Reply to This ]
      Bravo Tiff Bravo...pure poetry and without compromising your style...your right to be unique...loving it... so proud of to make this a favorite. `always write poetry, Cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-05-24 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]


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