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    dots Submission Name: Get Over Herdots
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    Author: Katj
    ASL Info:    17/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 103/89/24
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsGet Over Herdots
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    Why do you want to destroy everything?
    Bash your hopes
    And send yourself into a spiral of depression?
    If it was me,
    I would suppress the feelings for another time-
    A better time.
    A time where you could properly grieve.
    Get over her,
    And get under me.




    Submitted on 2005-05-24 15:28:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Lmao, I love the ending. Actually a great write,
    one question: Did you mean "bask" ? because it doesnt seem to fit. Great stuff either way.
    Big Bill
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    | Posted on 2005-05-24 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]


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