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    dots Submission Name: My Two Mothersdots
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    Author: Elibeth Gensch
    ASL Info:    15/F/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 1/6/3
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Story/Longing
    Total Views: 350
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       This was a poem I wrote when I met my Birth-Mother for the first time. It is not as good as the first, but I tried. Don`t be afraid to say what you think.


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    dotsMy Two Mothersdots
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    I sit on my bed, thinking. I am scared to death!
    I just found out my Grandmother has died.
    Now I would meet my mother...for the first time.
    As I sit on my bed, thinking, I just have to wonder Why.
    Why did my mother give me up?
    My Mom walks in the room. She helps me pack.

    As I walk into the room, a dead silence fills it.
    I look at all the unfamiliar faces.
    Why did I come here? Why?
    A woman with beautiful blonde hair comes up to me.
    Shaking my hand, she says, "I`m Sandy."
    This is my mother. But What about my Mom?

    As my Dad drives home, I ponder.
    "What if she hadn`t given me up?"
    I realize that God has a plan.
    I will leave it in his hands.




    Submitted on 2005-05-24 20:32:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      count your blessing young one you have got someone that loves you with all there heart
    and now you have another she wanted a better life for you and you are very lucky
    very good poem I can feel the emotion
    | Posted on 2005-05-25 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]



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