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    dots Submission Name: Game of Chancedots
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    Author: Blindly-N-Love
    ASL Info:    17/F
    Elite Ratio:    4.61 - 197/141/29
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 218
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1223



    Description:
       I got the idea from something that happened, but the ending doesnt fit my life. I just thought it was cute. I really like it, and I dont say that too often with my poems like this, but I do. Hope you enjoy it!!


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    dotsGame of Chancedots
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    I really couldn't tell you how I feel,
    Because I don't know if it's truly real.

    You keep saying those 3 little words,
    And I keep saying "It's so absurd."

    It's not because I don't believe you,
    Im just left without a single clue,
    Of how to feel in this game of chance.

    But back to you, and our romance,
    You've seen a side of me that no one sees,
    Im surprised you didn't leave.

    The side thats loved and the side thats hated,
    The ones of put downs, and becomes over-rated.

    But, your still here, by my side,
    Doing everything you haven't tried.

    I figure now, well, I suppose,
    That I should have listened to all that you've proposed.

    Because your leaving me behind,
    I wish that we could re-wind.

    I acted like I was too good,
    But, I didn't mean it, you just misunderstood.

    See, your what I wanted from the start,
    I just refused to listen to my heart.

    But, wherever you go, or whatever you do,
    Just know that I love you, too.




    Submitted on 2005-05-25 11:57:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cute poem
    or is it a song either way i like it a lot
    he words were heartspoken and you can feel what you wrote and picture you being there litterally saying this word by word
    i repeat it again i truly enjoyed reading this poem
    | Posted on 2005-05-25 00:00:00 | by Angel McCalmon | [ Reply to This ]



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