HA! HA! Tiffarina Ballarina...finally you speak your mind and true feelings. I just have to give applause for that...havent been here in a while, just got curious so thought I'd stop by to see whazzzzzzzap, but after reading this...yeah...you finally put into words how you feel...no caring except for oneself. Yuppers...thats you and the way you are. I compliment you for being able to write about it and put it as hiddenly evident as always. Nicely done. *slaps you on 4 head and rejoices* YOU ARE HEALED! Kudos, sparkarelos (if that aint a word it is now...it means "fireworks galore"), and jit-sop-judos (dunno what that means???)...take care, keep smilin' and rejoice in the soldier you are...oh yeah, one more thing...keep that savvy head on your shoulders...at all times, goobada, goobada...shoobada, shoobada. Have a good one.
Hey there one armed wonder...this was quite a refreshing poem...A little dose of LovePeaceJOy eh? Hope all is well with das brokn arm :) solid poem...more remarkable since it was typed one handed! WOO HOO!
I'm not sure how I feel about this. I really didn't feel any emotion when I read this. The flow and structure was good, but the poem itself I think needs to be added to. It's kind of empty of feeling, if that makes any sense. You are a good writer, maybe just try to put a little more emotion into this one. Keep up the writings!