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    dots Submission Name: Peace Eternaldots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsPeace Eternaldots

    Into the hands
    of truth
    place all trust
    no proof
    In Faith none
    Love 2 All
    Never weary in
    Live each day no

    Submitted on 2005-05-25 17:04:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HA! HA! Tiffarina Ballarina...finally you speak your mind and true feelings. I just have to give applause for that...havent been here in a while, just got curious so thought I'd stop by to see whazzzzzzzap, but after reading this...yeah...you finally put into words how you feel...no caring except for oneself. Yuppers...thats you and the way you are. I compliment you for being able to write about it and put it as hiddenly evident as always. Nicely done. *slaps you on 4 head and rejoices* YOU ARE HEALED! Kudos, sparkarelos (if that aint a word it is now...it means "fireworks galore"), and jit-sop-judos (dunno what that means???)...take care, keep smilin' and rejoice in the soldier you are...oh yeah, one more thing...keep that savvy head on your shoulders...at all times, goobada, goobada...shoobada, shoobada. Have a good one.
    | Posted on 2005-05-27 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey there one armed wonder...this was quite a refreshing poem...A little dose of LovePeaceJOy eh? Hope all is well with das brokn arm :) solid poem...more remarkable since it was typed one handed! WOO HOO!

    Stw! :0
    | Posted on 2005-05-27 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      Love 2 All

    i love that. this whole poem is warm and joyous and filled with loving God and truth. well done my friend. so much said in so few powerful words. my kinda poem!
    | Posted on 2005-05-26 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not sure how I feel about this. I really didn't feel any emotion when I read this. The flow and structure was good, but the poem itself I think needs to be added to. It's kind of empty of feeling, if that makes any sense. You are a good writer, maybe just try to put a little more emotion into this one. Keep up the writings!
    | Posted on 2005-05-26 00:00:00 | by Geraldine | [ Reply to This ]
      good rhyming! even though it was short - very short - it had emotion. My opinion: good poem! I think you could say a little more.I agree thatlife should follow these guidelines
    | Posted on 2005-05-25 00:00:00 | by ShatteredGlass | [ Reply to This ]

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