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Release Me


Author: Emerging Soul
ASL Info:    48/VERY female/Wisconsin
Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 1240 /1114 /244
Words: 127
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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Release Me



Tether me
So that I may struggle
Place binds around my wrists
So that I may strain
Against them
Cover my eyes
So that I may see
With my skin
And unleash the storm
That is trapped inside of me
I am so tired
Of fighting
Against myself
To contain the monster
To controll the beast
Stuffing it back inside
Like a Jack-In-The-Box
I am wired-up
And ready to spring
Restrain me
So that I may fight
Openly
Let me feel pain
So that I may cry
With reason
Let the passion swell
So that I may moan
With pleasure
Push me
So that I may go
Too far
Make me gasp
And scream
And claw
And weep
Then kiss me
Gently
So that I
May sleep




Submitted on 2004-04-07 10:22:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like this. It's very honest and intense. However, you have a typo (control is misspelled).
| Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
  I love the emotion and the feeling. You're work is amazing, as usual and I look forward to reading more of it...great write...
~Jaime Lee Pachétte~
| Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by darkened_soul | [ Reply to This ]
  this is very intense, very very intense. I think that was the point though. I like thsi a alot.
| Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by silentpoison | [ Reply to This ]


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