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    dots Submission Name: Life Is Not A Video Gamedots
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    Author: dx10687
    ASL Info:    22 / M / IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 13/19/18
    Words: 236
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 894
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1450



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       Say whatever you want about it. I had this going in my head for a long time then i wrote out.


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    dotsLife Is Not A Video Gamedots
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    Life Is Not A Video Game

    (Can be sung to any beat)

    Life is not a video game
    You canít restart
    You canít save
    You only have one chance
    So make it count

    If you blow it with someone
    By saying something wrong
    You canít retry it in life
    To try it again to make it work right

    Life is not a video game
    You canít restart
    You canít save
    You only have one chance
    So make it count

    Choices choices
    You can only choose once
    If you donít like the result
    Youíre in trouble because

    Life is not a video game
    You canít restart
    You canít save
    You only have one chance
    So make it count

    No matter how much you want to redo it
    You are in trouble because life is not a video game
    So you only have one time to do it
    So you need to try your best to make it count because

    Life is not a video game
    You canít restart
    You canít save
    You only have one chance
    So make it count

    But life is a video game sometimes
    Because you can get second chances
    But itís harder to have things work out
    Thus in the long run

    Life is not a video game
    You canít restart
    You canít save
    You only have one chance
    So make it count




    Submitted on 2005-05-26 08:16:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That's rad as a message but why not give it some tone. It's a special kind of message that hit me right threw the heart in one instant. Great job, keep up the good work and you can be in the hall of fame one day.
    | Posted on 2005-05-26 00:00:00 | by amenia_44 | [ Reply to This ]


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