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    dots Submission Name: Lifedots
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    Author: dx10687
    ASL Info:    22 / M / IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 13/19/18
    Words: 183
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
    Total Views: 732
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1170



    Description:
       I was venting on a trip cuz people where being stupid.


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    dotsLifedots
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    Life

    (Upbeat when sung)

    Life can be a b****
    Cuz people donít listen
    Cuz people donít care
    Cuz people donít understand
    Life can be a b****
    At one moment you can have respect
    The next moment you can have none
    Cuz people change & donít remember
    Life can be a b****
    Having too much on your mind
    Not being able to let off steam
    Having to hold it in is not good
    Life can be a b****
    Thinking too much & having no one around
    To tell your thoughts to
    That would understand them
    Life can be a b****
    Leaving people behind
    That you are just getting to know and
    Others that you around donít understand this
    Life can be a b****
    Some people will never understand
    Cuz they just wonít
    And few others will try
    Life can be a b****
    When people donít understand you
    And the way you think
    Or your sense of humor
    Life can be a b****
    When people think they know it all
    And thus wonít listen
    Or change their views
    Life can be a b****




    Submitted on 2005-05-26 08:18:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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