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    dots Submission Name: an american dreamdots
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    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    20/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 228/228/98
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 210
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    Bytes: 513



    Description:
       my first poem in verse


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    dotsan american dreamdots
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    To live in a world
    Where every things perfect
    And the family has no problems

    To live in a world
    Where every things convenient
    And nothings the same

    To live in a world
    With cars and money
    And have everything you ever wanted

    To live in a world
    Where everyone looks their best
    And there’s never any sickness

    To live in a world
    Of this perfection
    Could only be an American Dream!




    Submitted on 2005-05-26 16:56:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The American dream is the pursuit of happiness but people do tend to take it way too far as when they feed off the life of others to get where they are. I like this one. It is very true, and well written
    | Posted on 2005-05-26 00:00:00 | by SonAsylum | [ Reply to This ]
      Maybe not just an american dream...almost everybody dreams of that. But to tell you, a perfect life is the most miserable of all...
    the imperfections of this world are the things that makes strong people.
    | Posted on 2005-05-26 00:00:00 | by mr.mystery | [ Reply to This ]
      This was great and very true. I live in a small lakeside town in Michigan where a lot of celebrities like to vacation. Here everyone has to be perfect, always look there best and most people here are wealthy so everyone can pretty much have whatever they want. Great work!

    Karen
    | Posted on 2005-05-26 00:00:00 | by kp_2007 | [ Reply to This ]



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