Okay Star, I donno who ur waiting 4 but theyll cum soon! i PROMISE, lol when I read ur writes I JUST DONT UNDERSTAND CUZ you seem so hppy, on the outside wen were with other people but wen i get u alone, ur totaly diferant, How can u cover it up so well?
Theres definatly alot of potential in your writing ...Okay so it wasnt the best thing ever,,,,but it was still worth reading ..and like i said ..theres potential there...Just a tip...Dont put in your descriptiong that [censored] ...people will thing you do because you said it ...not because of anything youve written ..Blessed Be
i loved your words. most people can't seem to put their emotions in a song, but you did...and i feel really lucky to have stumbled upon your god given poem. it kind of made me feel better to know that i'm not the only one in this world with these kind of "thoughts". so keep up the good work. and thank you for writing such a lovely poem. it inspired me.
It was alright I thought it could of been more in here like more detail and more words to cacth the readers attentions. the words in the piece where to simple for my likeing so it made the poem seem kinda bland. well i'm soory if it seems like i'm [censored] but i'm just trying to help. well i don't know what elset o say hope to hear from you.keep writing.