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    dots Submission Name: Faithdots
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    Author: mandycandygirl
    ASL Info:    19 / F / Guam
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 13/9/3
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 239
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 597



    Description:
       This poem was written about a friend of mine.


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    dotsFaithdots
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    She sits on the wooden table
    A cup sits in front of her
    Filled with hot tea or coffee
    She is a dreamer
    A writer of fantasies
    A producer of adventure
    She can start a war
    One man on this side
    One man on that side
    She is powerful
    My life is different now
    His life is different now
    She is beautiful
    No one tells
    Everyone knows
    Yet, she still sits on the wooden table
    A cup still sits in front of her
    I wonder, if this time,
    She is drinking something different




    Submitted on 2005-05-26 22:14:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      im going to agree with thinkingofyou your poem has power meaning it says alot but i to feel there is something that you should add. it is a really good poems dont get me wrong, theres just that somwthing missing that seems to be holding it back for me
    | Posted on 2005-05-28 00:00:00 | by Natie | [ Reply to This ]
      this poem almost brings tears to my eyes
    i can really see the imagry
    reading this makes me want to call up my b/f and get him to hold me close and tell me everythings alright
    keep up the good work
    kristen
    | Posted on 2005-05-27 00:00:00 | by darkonesgirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm. Great, good, bad, terrible, Amazing! All words I could use to discribe your poem. But I feel the need to say somthing else. Im not sure what, so when I find out what I need to say I will surly come back and say it.

    Love from Within
    | Posted on 2005-05-27 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey girlie, i love this poem only cause it's about me and it was written by my favorite "enemy." Gotta love that. Anyway, i'm glad you're finally posting something. I'm adding it to my favorites.

    Faith
    | Posted on 2005-06-10 00:00:00 | by calling eve | [ Reply to This ]



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