Description: This is something that I wrote when I had this really cool imaginary friend. when it said 'how did you get inside me', it means my mind. he was always in my head!
Soul -------------------------------------------
From the soul to its waste.
The Common hates his evil twin.
Everything invaded.
In its simplicity.
How did you get inside me?
Still all fascinated.
Invaded by everything.
In the first morning light.
The touch of death covering skies.
Everything invaded.
And all the fears inspired.
How did you get inside me?
Still all celebrated.
Invaded by everything.
Everything so full.
In the lives I have taken with Me.
All our moments wasted.
All is getting in.
Still all violated.
Divided by everything.
And all the grace disturbed.
All existence false.
All your dead generations.
I am a sun of yours and I am coming back.
Everything invaded.
In its finality.
Tell me, will it hurt.
When you get outside of me?
Everything is breaking.
Why have we ever stopped here?
Everything invaded.
I am a sun of yours.
And I am giving up.
Everything invaded.
Invaded by everything.
like jessa, that line stuck with me. and the last line...wow, impact was absolutley incredible. you don't find a poem like this very often, one that is writtien with such passion you can't help but feel the passion fumping out at you throught the words. i absolutley loved it. a fave for sure. i can't wait for another one like this from you. keep up the good work kid
"The touch of death covering skies, everything invaded" for some reason this line stuck out for me. Also the last line was absolutly incredible...I am a son of yours and I am giving up, everything invaded, invaded by everything. It had a lot of emotion and I can feel the feelings of giving up, or feeling conquered.
Submission Name: Soul
