Love is a complicated
When you are new to it
You don’t know what to say
And you don’t want to screw it up
Especially when you like the person
Because before we started talking
I was always feeling depressed
But then I asked you out
And you said yes
Then it was as if
The hole in my
Heart had been filled
Then you left to go to KC
And then it was as if the hole
In my heart had come back again
But now you are back in town
And the hole in my heart
Is filled once again
sounds more like a letter but if u have the passion then use it. im sure for who this was intended u got the point across.so keep it up if u came to this site u r willing to take this somewhere
Love can be a good thing and can be a bad thing, this write seamed to be more venting the poetry. Keep writing anf I'll keep reading. But do tey a little harder next time, you do have some good qualities in your work. god bless,
Submission Name: Feelings
