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Write About the Pain


Author: prettybaby
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Write About the Pain



happy things just don't have
as much feeling as the pain

it's easier to write of what
I've lost than what I've gained

thinking of the good times
makes me hurt even more

because things are no longer
the way they were before

so I write about the tears
I've cried since I let go

of all the good things that have happened -
what my words will never show




Submitted on 2005-05-27 15:20:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ok, this is going on my favs. This is based around what you do, but also around what I do too. I love this although it really doesn't have a point. Good job.

Sincerely,
darkchild_41
| Posted on 2005-11-21 00:00:00 | by darkchild_41 | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey! I haven't been on and I'm trying to catch up on what you've written since I've been gone. What you said is all too true, painful feelings are so much stronger than happy ones and they tend to dig deeper into your soul. I find it easier to think of something sad and still feel the pain as fresh as when it first came than think of something happy and still feel happy about it. Great job though!

Karen
| Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by kp_2007 | [ Reply to This ]


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