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    dots Submission Name: No More You And Medots
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    Author: anita_89
    ASL Info:    18/F/Brazil
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 145/200/42
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Friendship
    Total Views: 275
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    dotsNo More You And Medots
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    it was too late at night
    for me to think clearly

    I was waiting for your call
    you never called

    the next morning
    i said hi
    you said bye

    i didnt understand
    why you were ignoring me

    you seemed pissed
    but didnt want to show it

    this is not the first time
    this happens

    im tired of worrying about
    your friendship

    we are done
    no more trust in us
    no more friendship
    i can't deal with you no more
    i'm tired of the fights
    of the screams
    of the bitchiness
    i'm tired and its over

    no more you and me




    Submitted on 2005-05-28 11:29:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it but im not sure who your talking about... it is a friend or a lover? or is a friend who says they want you to but doesnt act like it...i feel the emotion ver deeply though because i have been their a time or two prolly more
    | Posted on 2005-06-27 00:00:00 | by endmypain | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this poem, and in ways I can relate to it. I know what it's like to finally just put an end to everything, and sometimes it's a hard decision to make. It's a sad poem, but the meaning is great. Good job.
    ~Kriss
    | Posted on 2005-05-28 00:00:00 | by juss_kriss | [ Reply to This ]
      hey ana. wow, really awesome poem. well, i wanna apologize for not saying good bye this morning, but when my mom came u looked so cute and soundly asleep and u told me on fri that u were exhausted, so i decided to let u sleep and not wake you. sorry! well, i had tons of fun with ya yesterday especially watching kung pow, although i was like so dead so i might have been a little boring :) well, luv ya
    talk later
    | Posted on 2005-05-28 00:00:00 | by courts | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this poem. I really can relate to it, I know the feeling of when your friends keep letting you down and you get tired of it. It's sad really...but it's great you found the strenth to stand up for yourself. I love my friends so much but when things are falling apart it seems I should do the same as what you described in your poem, but it's really hard. Keep writing, I suggest you check grammical errors, it makes the poem more..."attractive".
    | Posted on 2005-05-28 00:00:00 | by Mia | [ Reply to This ]



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