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    dots Submission Name: Inevidabledots

    Author: Geraldine
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 241/296/80
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 595
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 586

       Saying stuff on paper that I can't say to his face.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    Anger is left,
    lingering in my head.
    Madness is on my mind.
    Rage is in my eyes.

    Happiness just wasn't meant to be for us.
    This grudge we have is inevidable,

    We've so far past the point of forgiveness,
    never able to go back.
    And through all of our efforts,
    we've only deepend the wounds.

    I'm growing content with knowing,
    that we won't ever be again.
    We need to let go of the unattainable,
    and embrace what the future beholds.

    Submitted on 2005-05-28 12:50:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this i have had these feelings before as well it is heard and i have not been able to let go of the person even though i sometimes wish i could. oh well maybe one day it can be fixed but some wonds to the heart can not be mended. anyways great work on this piece. lia
    | Posted on 2005-05-28 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      Not too shabby at all. Good work liss', you know I'm a fan, as you are me.
    I want to thank you for the comment on my worst poem to date.
    I'm speaking of "Forever"
    I will try not to write such garbage, I was just tired and felt like writing.
    Anyhow, I'm off to work.
    Have a great day :)
    Big B-i-l-l
    | Posted on 2005-06-03 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]

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