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    dots Submission Name: Alchemistdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I am an alchemist.
    I turn words
    into golden mirrors
    that reflect your soul.




    Submitted on 2004-04-07 15:14:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You ooze subliminal messages through these lines. That is all I have to say.
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this image, it makes me think of tact. you know, turning something negative into positive. a good subtitle for this would be 'Spin Doctor'!
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]
      The problem with alchemy is that it was all a bunch of hogwash somebody made up(I guess it is like writing >wink<). I like the metaphor.
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by DevilDinosaur | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not sure what to write about it. The golden mirror of transformed words reflects the soul. It's very eloquent but it still has that "I am a lumberjack, I will cut you down" like feel. Well, not in theme of course ;) but just a little cheesy. I am a ship I will sail you across turbulent waters etc etc. Try to add elaboration I guess?
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by Webmaster | [ Reply to This ]
      Well done i like the use of four lines to create a nice compact writing well done
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by sunraybutterfly | [ Reply to This ]
      Well put wordsmith!...sometimes the answers are so simple & sublime.........................
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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