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    dots Submission Name: HEdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    In midst of veiled
    waking dream
    Remember Me
    Er, Euch, Uns, Zie
    each colors
    letters A to Z
    Words of Love sailed
    Disciple team
    Actions cry
    Remember He




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      your pieces are often(this being no exception) outlandishly intriuging. Coveted in a vale of altering interpretations, pending on the mindset of the reader, while holding true to it's form of your own meaning.
    | Posted on 2006-03-20 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]


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