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    dots Submission Name: Freedom Fightersdots
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    Author: BloodBaptism
    ASL Info:    18/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 17/18/4
    Words: 246
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
    Total Views: 937
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1485



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       Dedicated to the brave men and women who died in the war on terrorism, may you live on forever in our hearts... HooRah!!


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    dotsFreedom Fightersdots
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    look at me...
    im the soldier from east texas fightin'
    so you can sleep in peace at night and
    no that ill do everything to keep you free...

    and look at me...
    i'm a soldier from oklahoma marchin'
    towards the million machine guns barkin'
    and keep going on because i want you free...

    i would fight the good fight beside my brothers
    and i'd lay my life down for another
    i would bleed for you, 'cause you'd die for me
    we would show the world that freedom don't come free
    and i would go to war with my countrymen
    we would fight the battles and take the win
    we will fear no evil, and fear no pain
    we would fight for you out in that pourin' rain!

    now look at us...
    we're the soldiers from America drivin'
    so we can keep you all alive and
    make the terrorist end their reign on the world...

    i would fight the good fight beside my brothers
    and i'd lay my life down for another
    i would bleed for you, 'cause you'd die for me
    we would show the world that freedom don't come free
    and i would go to war with my countrymen
    we would fight the battles and take the win
    we will fear no evil, and fear no pain
    we would fight for you out in that pourin' rain!

    AND I WOULD DIE FOR YOU!




    Submitted on 2005-05-30 22:03:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      What a nice tribute to the many men & women fighting all over the world. Yes, i didn't understand vvv's comment but ????

    I am also curious as to the music. I bet it makes an awesome sound!

    Great job! Love,Peace,Joy!
    | Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, vvv is kind of an idiot, but whatever. Anyway - the poem! Brillianty done. Written with passion and catchy phrases, not too boring, and it makes a good point. Several good points, actually.
    Writing style is more than advanced. Seems to me like this could be a song.

    This poem gives the glory back to soldiers...glory that should never die.
    | Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by JKPS613 | [ Reply to This ]
      Only an american would think that the war is fought by yanks alone. Poems about blind patriotism realy turn my stomach. The bird can only say what it hears. Polly want a cracker sevred in an american flag soaked through with the blood of young men and women the world over?
    | Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by vvv | [ Reply to This ]
      This was really good...i'm sort of curious to see how the music is. It reminds me of something Toby Keith would've written. Just to get a picture...is the supposed to be acoustic?

    Faith
    | Posted on 2005-05-30 00:00:00 | by calling eve | [ Reply to This ]
      OK, we're agreed - vv is a dope.
    This should be printed and pasted on the wall of every do-goodin' peacenick wannabe's wall, and they should be made to read it three times a day!

    Great song. my new friend, very well done.

    Be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-06-02 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]


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