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    dots Submission Name: blind childdots
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    Author: Damien Vladimir
    ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 122/89/35
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsblind childdots
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    stop with the games
    you fuel me up with rage
    i need to leave the cage
    i need an outer space

    don't erase me
    contemplate a serious facing
    mutilate the pride contending
    speak to me with eyes of glaze

    years discourage pleasing others
    leaves attention in the gutter
    looking for a place to settle
    in the search of ground so subtle

    impressions lost like years in trying
    younger minds keep rise in multiplying
    your existance they deny now

    struggle lifts survival to the grave phase
    the sepultura of amazing no escaping
    consciousness awaits the trial tribulation
    hoping only for the crown of long existance




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