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Wasted years


Author: Damien Vladimir
ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca
Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 122 /89 /35
Words: 80
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Wasted years



drenching weakness through my habits
i'm drenching the years in havoc
separate me from this negative structure
give me a form of fixture

numb my mind synapsis
leave me lifeless with pure panic
what i give is nothing grand
for when i get i set the stand

I never awoke from the dream
when in the air, my mind is shattered in debris
so humbble when i scream
with eyes so innocent, my recital brings my actions menacing




Submitted on 2005-05-31 01:02:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  god damn VERY good write, and a well focused great poem with HUGE potentail, wish it wa slogner, id gladly read more of your work but its 1 am and im goign to bed nice way to finish the night, thank you for your time and concideration to come write this and submit it to this community
| Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by obsidiandreams | [ Reply to This ]


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