Wasted years -------------------------------------------
drenching weakness through my habits
i'm drenching the years in havoc
separate me from this negative structure
give me a form of fixture
numb my mind synapsis
leave me lifeless with pure panic
what i give is nothing grand
for when i get i set the stand
I never awoke from the dream
when in the air, my mind is shattered in debris
so humbble when i scream
with eyes so innocent, my recital brings my actions menacing
god damn VERY good write, and a well focused great poem with HUGE potentail, wish it wa slogner, id gladly read more of your work but its 1 am and im goign to bed nice way to finish the night, thank you for your time and concideration to come write this and submit it to this community
Submission Name: Wasted years
