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    dots Submission Name: Rich Black Mendots
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    Author: AfricanPrincess
    ASL Info:    21/F/SA
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 222/201/31
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    Description:
       YUMMY;0) I've recently been finding myself sooooo ATTRACTED to black guys! i've discovered the BEAUTY in the richness of their skin tone . . . Truth be told: i had one yummy episode with a black guy and i'm yearning 4more!
    Njoy and plz comment


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    dotsRich Black Mendots
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    Rich dark Lint chocolate
    drip ... ping
    drip ... ping
    racing down the nape of your neck

    Rich dark cocoa grains
    infused with streaks of caramel
    stumb ... ling
    stumb ... ling
    across your nipples trailing to your navel

    Rich dark mocha mousse
    rol ... ling
    rol ... ling
    from the groove of your hips
    to your version of my lips

    Rich dark toffee
    stick ... ing
    stick ... ing
    lacing my latte thighs
    melt . . . ing ino me




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    ||| Comments |||
      mm.. *blush*.. :)

    Im white and male..

    So.. ja.. this does not much for me.. Maybe I should read something of yours that relates to me more..

    :)

    Shaun
    | Posted on 2006-05-29 00:00:00 | by shanu | [ Reply to This ]
      lol alrite i found this poem interesting yet somewhat disturbing , i myself as a white male, dont understand your lust towards a black man, but good write
    | Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by obsidiandreams | [ Reply to This ]
      Clearing my throat lol ...now this was a daring and extremely vivid erotic poem...I thought by your screen name your were black like me but this read implys that not to be true or I doubt if you would find the chocolate tone of a man's skin so awe-inspiring . From experience I have found that the pigmentation of a person's skill doesn't add or take away ...just happens to be the temple God put a soul in...sorry about the preaching...lol
    `always write poetry, Cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      You never been attracted to black dudes OMG girl I am so glad you found out what you were missing My babu is black and I've never ever loved anyone as much as him! He is my inspiration for everything I do and you know he got the dick lol well I'm glad you are finding yourself Peace Mysterious
    | Posted on 2005-06-20 00:00:00 | by Mysterious Blue | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this is extremely funny. Seriously, the euphemisms... oh god.

    The idea of "your version of my lips" kind of made me laugh really, really hard.

    Oh man. Hahahaha.
    | Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by DeadGod | [ Reply to This ]


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