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Submission Name: shattered dreamz dots

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Author:	kristian
ASL Info:	28/male/modesto, ca
Elite Ratio:	3.73 - 66/44/27
Words:	118

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Misc
Total Views:	289
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	729

Description:
how can i describe my stuff each person that reads it shall take on a meaning for them selfs
so please come inside and feel what i have put down
all comments are taken and gladdly excepted
peace
o'hh in this particular pieace The (Z)'s are there on purpose. its just my style

shattered dreamz dots

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Shattered dreamz, violent screams
im running from a forse i've never seen
and im tired of being a puppet in this show of fiendz
come cut my stringz
Now hold me up
my demons are coming--i thought i was tough
but when they seduse me i can never get enough
Now falling to my knees i've grown weak
i open my mouth, but unable to speak
so i hide my pain in a sea of chains
locking them up, so i can refrain from going insane
under these waves are serenity
my music helps break the fall
come inside hear my demons chant their call
cursing my soul
destined to be buried
behind this wall

Kris Gaskins

Submitted on 2005-05-31 05:49:45 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i love when im able to make a picture in my head from the words that i read i dont get to do it that offten im really enjoying reading all your stuff keep up the good work : )
| Posted on 2008-03-16 00:00:00 | by abstracted | [ Reply to This ]
  damn youre good with the lyrics man. if you dont already have music written for it you should do that. great job.

oh and by the way the z's give it a little edge.
Peace and God Bless.

-BB-
| Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by BloodBaptism | [ Reply to This ]
  this was like 'whoa' A big burst of emotion and thoughts. I loved it. Great work. The [z]'s worked well with this peice, i like your flow also.

Love from Within
| Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]
  I can get a clear picture in this poem. I love it! i often feel this way - like i am just a puppet in life. I often lock up all my feelings and never let them go, even to my best friends. Excellent!
| Posted on 2005-06-02 00:00:00 | by ShatteredGlass | [ Reply to This ]
  WOW! What can I say Wow! I felt this to the heart! You have a good talent here. I know how it is to feel just a few moments of peace can mean like having a flood of jewel around us. It is so rare and beautiful. You should really add music to this.
| Posted on 2005-06-03 00:00:00 | by akaietowa-ru_18 | [ Reply to This ]

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