very short piece here. i usually ask for more from people but this one should stay exactly as it is. you have a lot of talent and it seems you have quite a bit of experience writing. great job. God Bless
OOOOOH AND IT RHYMES! This was a lovely picture painted of the changing of the guard as you put it :) And while your on the topic of half moons, couldn't help but think of a half-moon cookie! mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm good :)
Hi, Tiff, nicely done, and I wish I'd been there. I liked your spider web too, they must be good, cos they always make me wish that there'd been more! You're doin' good for a one-armed bandit! Hope you're good,
Very short piece with a lot of feeling. Nice metaphors with the muse and the guard and the bard. If you could, I think it would be better if it was longer, because this seems like it would make a fantastic last stanza. Or even a repetitive stanza thrown in between others.