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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 21
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 575
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 147



    Description:
       Watched a spider catch an unsuspecting bug....
    Love,Peace,Joy!!!

    Yum! Tastes like chicken!


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    Patient spider spinning web
    so strong
    A step in silk gone
    so wrong
    Prey is caught where they
    don't belong!




    Submitted on 2005-05-31 11:46:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this one made me laugh. you have a great gift for getting a big story out in few lines. excellent work. I have to go see what else youve written so i can get a better feel for how you write.
    God Bless

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    | Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by BloodBaptism | [ Reply to This ]
      mmmmmmmmmmm chicken :) Lol :) Ok, I get the idea, as long as it isn't seagull :) This here poem reminded me of a mutant haiku :) MutoEpiphiKu...that's what we'll call it. When you try to write a haiku and say, Awwww hell, I hate writing haikus :)

    Keep Writing :)

    STw
    | Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]


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