This is a really good poem, I like how you created an archaic, almost mythical voice within this poem, furthered by the allusions to traditional things like 'a golden cup'. It also has points of inspired imagery such as 'An apple tree amidst a desert' - evoking the image of something good and fruitful growing amongst nothing and 'tropical whiff' - giving us the idea of something sharp, fruitful and fresh like the ideals you allude to. The poem is made vivid through the use two senses, sight and smell. Perhaps I could suggest a summary of the poem's subject might make a good title like 'The Death of the Mythic Queen', perhaps combining it with ideals. A good write, keep them coming,
I really like this, and i thought the imagery was amazing...i think that when you read this that one is taken to another world. when i read it i felt like i was somewhere different and far away, i liked that effect nice work
It's feels original as i have not read anything quite like this before and i like how you made the writing flow.