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    dots Submission Name: Poetry of a Homicidal Sort pt1dots
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    Author: ashlee_jane2003
    ASL Info:    24-female-Indianapolis
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 210/210/39
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 263
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       This pretty much expains it's self. I'm pissed and I'm venting. I thought about adding more to it because I have a whole lot more evil, violent, sadistic senireos ( spelled all kinds of wrong) that I could encorpurate into it. It would be pretty great actually if you like the poetry of a homicidal sort. Let me know what to do. I now have Childs to thank for the title. I couldn't think of anything and he gave me this. Thanks babe.


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    dotsPoetry of a Homicidal Sort pt1dots
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    I'm gonna rant and rave
    And scream in your face
    I'm gonna kick you in the forehead
    Tell you you're a disgrace

    I look at you now
    And just stare with disgust
    At how ugly you are
    With greed and distrust

    You once looked me in the eye
    And coldly said you care
    Well not anymore
    Don't you fucking dare

    I'm over it, I'm done
    With all your petty shit
    I'm leaving you behind
    I DO deserve better than this!!!!!




    Submitted on 2005-05-31 20:51:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      whoever it is you're pissed at, they'd better run away and hide if they wanna live. so much of this sounds like something i would write, it's great. if you have more, then add it, it's really good. as for a title, you're on your own. i don't think it really needs one.

    gwen
    | Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by Anticlownperson | [ Reply to This ]
      What a great read. Waiting for the "lot more evil, violent, sadistic senireos" to fill the page. (tap tap tap) waiting...

    And your title for this one should be "poetry of a homicidal sort part I"
    | Posted on 2005-06-02 00:00:00 | by childs | [ Reply to This ]



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