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    dots Submission Name: acrostic poems!dots
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    Author: ShatteredGlass
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 21/26/9
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       my acrostic poems. simple, yet has much feeling. they are really easy to write!


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    dotsacrostic poems!dots
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    "Halos"
    H earing heavenly voices
    A ll at once, they call me.
    L osing consciousness; in the dark
    O verwheming power
    S aving me from the world.

    "dragons"

    D aring to fly higher than the world
    R aging breaths of fire
    A rcing over mountains
    G one with the wind; wings dancing
    O ver the oceans, the mountains, the clouds
    N ever stopping until their last dance
    S ilently soaring in peace




    Submitted on 2005-06-01 08:49:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow haven't seen an acrostic poem on ES ever!... *overly joyful* well anyway i love acrostic poems these ones especially. so yeah good job, i shall read some of your other poems and comment on them. THNX

    - Nammy
    | Posted on 2005-06-01 00:00:00 | by Namlooc20 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a great format and it is Giving off a mystic vibe of midevil days, very cool indeed.

    I like your first stanza the best, very strong use of words w/imagery..
    | Posted on 2005-06-01 00:00:00 | by childs | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like these because they're well done, and in a style everyone considers childish and stupid. but these are really good, not at all childish or stupid. very nice.

    gwen
    | Posted on 2005-06-01 00:00:00 | by Anticlownperson | [ Reply to This ]
      Pretty cool. It was a nice idea to put together a little collection of writings in this format. I think it's actually quite difficult to express anything decent in this way, seeing as how it's so stereotypcaly childish to most people, but you've really done a good job.
    | Posted on 2005-06-01 00:00:00 | by gavinspikenard | [ Reply to This ]



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