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    dots Submission Name: Emotional Issuesdots
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    Author: ladyngold
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 585/520/99
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Formly The Guardian Of Souls...revised ending made it necessary to change title.


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    dotsEmotional Issuesdots
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    I believed that everyone had this “soul mate”
    designed specifically solely for them by God.

    Much of my life was spent believing this convinced
    too many times believing my quest was over.

    An illusion another impossible perfect man,
    I watched in horror, as this image would divide like
    he was standing in front of a warped carnival mirror.

    Impossible for me to tell which “personality” was he
    I persistently, unrealistically desperately plunge forward
    determined and refusing to accept the inevitable truth.

    Violently I am repelled with various emotional issues.

    As realization and resolution painfully fused
    thankfully perfect releasing revelation feed my soul.

    Spiritual wounds were sanitized with healing tears
    wholly accepting that lonelyness is what I most fear.




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      Can <@> get a witness & AMEN! It's really sad we all do that to ourselves; looking for a more completeness & perfection in others. Find "IT" within and from HIM & the rest will come.
    I'm happy you are vocalizing your gloom & doom & taking notice that you're not too bad off after all ~ look @ all the people who love u girl!
    Love,Peace,Joy!
    | Posted on 2005-06-01 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi Cheryl, wow! this is really good! Semi love poem semi self-confession, all with a religious twist!
    I personally think that you have a guardian angel, who (now and again) shows themselves in somebody else.
    We always read too much in people, after all, they ARE just people!

    Very nicely done, I love it!

    Be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-06-01 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      While I am not a Christian, I can relate to your hunt for a soul mate. I do not believe that we have just one person that is designated just for us. I believe that we have an unending supply of love to give to people. I have loved several people in my life and each was real love. Since love is inexhaustable, I still have just as much to give to my present husband as I did the first person I ever loved. While I am not a Christian, I do believe that love comes from the divine spark within each of us. Love, Lynn
    | Posted on 2005-06-04 00:00:00 | by greensnake | [ Reply to This ]
      What about people who dont believe in God?
    People who aren't Christian...who is THEIR soul mate?
    There may not be a perfect man, but there is a perfect life partner for everyone. and you just have to find them.
    I respect you for loving Jesus Christ so much, from what I read in the bible he is a spectacular man, but that is no reason to live a life without a partner.
    maybe I read the poem wrong, but that's whatI got outta it.
    keep it up anyways.

    much love,
    kris
    | Posted on 2005-06-01 00:00:00 | by angelfyre | [ Reply to This ]


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