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You were there

Author: Enleigh
ASL Info:    16/f/WI
Elite Ratio:    2.32 - 21 /32 /13
Words: 131
Class/Type: Poetry /You left me
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just about a friend...who i think hopefully someday he'll call and i wont have to worry about missing him.

You were there

You were all I had,
I think you actually cared.
It's like you were actually glad,
that you left me impaired.

How could you just leave,
I miss you so much.
I’m just left alone to receive,
your hurtful, cold, touch.

I haven’t even cried,
it's just not right,
because it's not time to say good bye.
I’m so sick of this fight.

Im afraid that you’re gone,
but it just cant be.
I won’t let your hurt dawn,
upon me.

I wont let you go
Im never going to give in,
because deep down I know
you miss me within.

Please don’t let this be the end,
It just can’t be.
I know your still my best friend,
and deep down you love me.

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