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    dots Submission Name: Logic Cannot Apply to Nonsensedots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsLogic Cannot Apply to Nonsensedots
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    In those stuck hours of the morning
    when I get up too early,
    and you sleep too late.
    I swear the clock doesn't move.
    I try to make sense
    of your sleep mumblings,
    but logic cannot apply to nonsense,
    and that only makes
    the sound more beautiful--
    no symphony can compare.





    Submitted on 2004-04-07 19:23:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Amy,
    I love the title of this one. You invoke a feeling of intimacy that made me smile. I love watching my loved ones sleep.
    jan
    | Posted on 2004-04-10 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      i feel that way too when i look at my "friend" when she sleeps... except the symphony sounds more like an Amtrak train with hiccups...
    Seriously though, this is really beautiful and i love the line "logic cannot apply to nonsense"
    - fifi
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by halopop | [ Reply to This ]
      this is adorable. its a nice simple portrayal of an otherwise complex emotion. how sweet. great job
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by slwht | [ Reply to This ]
      ha i love this! i really love your work! i identify with this... kinda of describes my insomnia well... just sitting round waiting for the world to wake up but no one ever does... thanx for the great write!
    | Posted on 2004-04-17 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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