Cool twist on this. I'm sure i've read "the daffodils" before but it was probably in high school, which i tend not to remember very well. So i just reread it and i'm positive "the Deathodils" was much more interesting. You did a great job with this.
Disturbing and touching all at once. I can imagine the evil swarm speckling and then blanketing the horizon. Sadistical little flowers. So trippy. But scary trippy. I hope to god no one near me or... me, ever hallucinates about sucha thing. Aweful. Scary. I loved the poem. Don't know about the original write, but this was teek. Sweet. Rofty. Cool. Serious. Spiff. All good things. Peace. -rue
this was very good i loved it very much im going to say that i can relate but im not sure you will feel the same i hope to reade more of your work and hope very much that you dont let anybody get in the way of what you like to d.