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Submission Name: ideas to be proud of dots

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Author:	wilderness
ASL Info:	23/M/Surrey, UK
Elite Ratio:	3.19 - 252/359/86
Words:	44

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	351
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	287

Description:
these little windows will hopefully (eventually) fit like stained glass.

ideas to be proud of dots

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let's all go to art school
make excuses for ideas
paint something pretty and worthless
and talk about depth...

of a sadness as true as the ocean is blue

my feet are too translucent
in this fluid
for movement

Submitted on 2005-06-02 14:27:38 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!

||| Comments |||
  I liked this poem...short and to the point...It carried a powerful meaning...I like the general idea...people not creating art...just pictures...people are losing there creativity...
I loved the fact that you wrote a poem about this topic...
And I loved the poem...

...Sage Unadorned...
| Posted on 2005-11-04 00:00:00 | by jessie thomas | [ Reply to This ]
  ? no offense or anything..but explain this to me, I'm young and don't know the meaning of the word "depth". It sounds cool at least.
| Posted on 2005-06-02 00:00:00 | by BenevolantWords | [ Reply to This ]
  i like it. where have you been? hope things are going better for you than me:P

expand this, it's very musical but did you mean "translucent" in the last part?
| Posted on 2005-06-02 00:00:00 | by joe quinn | [ Reply to This ]

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