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    dots Submission Name: acrostic poems! #3dots
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    Author: ShatteredGlass
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 21/26/9
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Misc/Death
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       more acrosticy poems!


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    dotsacrostic poems! #3dots
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    “Devil”

    Descending into the darkest depths
    Every angel rejoices.
    Victory! cried God. I am king!
    Incidentally, God didn’t know one thing.
    Lucifer was now king of his own world.







    “Thorns”

    Thick, sharp, and pointy
    Hurts to the touch
    Ouch! she cried, and stuck herself in the arm again.
    Running down her fingers and on to the ground, her fresh blood makes a small pool.
    Never has she seen a more beautiful color!
    Smiling happily, the color drains from her face, and she sleeps.







    “Halos”

    Hearing heavenly voices
    All at once, they call me.
    Losing consciousness; in the dark
    Overwhelming power
    Saving me from the world.




    Submitted on 2005-06-02 18:44:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      whoa, like no way i was thinking almost in way something that could resemble a thought about that...almost. just messin. I like it though. It's deffinately different in a allusive way.(that's a compliment). I might, well i don't know what i might do, i'm me, you're you...ok now i'm just pointing out the obvious. not bad, i'd watch it though, they can be peculiar, especially when you don't realize it, take care, be well, and all that crap so many of us wish we could
    | Posted on 2005-06-02 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]



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