Tiff glad you included an introduction for this poem or I would have probably not as got as much fun as I did out of it you wrote this in a way that might tempt someone to get one of these seemingly entertaining x- rated Kaleidoscopes whisper me the store where I might examine one LOL! `always write poetry, Cheryl.
Tiffany, this is exotic, erotic and narcotic! You have captured the art of sending the reader on a magical mystery tour with so few words, it's hard to believe... As usual, nothing to criticise or recommend, except (put Cheryl out of her misery and tell her where to get one!) Bravo, oh Baroness of Brevity! I bow before you
wow! this is short and sexy! I think the length was perfect and your words just flowed together great! My first reaction to this was jaw drop. This is a great sexy little piece. Better than that little black dress
haha, I've been away for a bit and didn't see yer new posts :) This one was short and to the point, x-el-ent :)! I'm sure you're sad you had to miss the party :( but hey, watcha gonna do eh? :) Especially with only one arm :P
Well two lover's twist of the imagination is the most wonderful of love's longings sated. We slake ourselves on the moment as passion designs us before her eyes. I have the the most beautiful lover in my life, so I can relate to a little twist and turn of the plot. One person in the act of creation is art, two is art and love...pure pleasure. peace and love, Nan