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    dots Submission Name: Suicidedots
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    Author: DonKB
    ASL Info:    34/m/goergia
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 19/17/11
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/I am dead inside
    Total Views: 888
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 387



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    dotsSuicidedots
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    Suicide

    These entire things that keep running threw my mind.
    I donít know if I should die or just keep hiding.
    If I only knew then I wouldnít be here now.
    Tell me should I conform to the world around me.
    I try to be who I am but itís not what the world wants.
    I think Iíll just die? I think Iíll commit Suicide.






    Submitted on 2005-06-02 23:22:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, this one is really grim! everyone should strive for their own uniqueness, be what they are! Pretending to be someone you're not is weak and phony! Life is too precious to throw away regardless of how bad things are. Not sure if this one is personal or merely expression. not sure how to comment, you've left me stumped! Take care of yourself!
    | Posted on 2005-06-03 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a grief stricken poem, very mood altering, I wish you would write some more. The world needs unique people too. :)
    | Posted on 2005-06-03 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]


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