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    dots Submission Name: Great Darkness of the Nightdots
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    Author: Enleigh
    ASL Info:    16/f/WI
    Elite Ratio:    2.32 - 21/32/13
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 312
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    Bytes: 665



    Description:
       just something i wrote when i was outside(obviously)


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    dotsGreat Darkness of the Nightdots
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    Outside
    Where the sky is black,
    and the stars are deep
    No one to stab you in the back
    No one to here you weep

    Outside,
    Where my mind drifts away,
    and my heart runs free
    No one to see you decay,
    in this world of hate and debris

    Outside,
    Where everything seams right,
    and everyone has their place
    In this great great darkness of night,
    everything seems to hide behind a face

    Outside,
    Where there is one last thought,
    and one last worry to float away
    Your mind can be distraught,
    and you life aloud to be astray




    Submitted on 2005-06-03 11:26:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well done... I enjoyed the repetition at the beginning of each stanza as it was not overdone... There were a few spelling/usage errors, but that's nothing really... Very good overall
    | Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by Meckes | [ Reply to This ]



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