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    dots Submission Name: freedots
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    Author: lynn7
    ASL Info:    43/ St. Augustine, FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 419/288/103
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1005
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1114



    Description:
       I wrote this about two years ago. I believe it's about
    me growing up or maturing with in the body of Christ.




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    I知 starting to see everything so clear
    I知 not afraid anymore
    To become what I was born for
    Oh lord,
    How was I to know
    Correct me if I知 false
    I never want to misuse your word
    I never want to mislead
    Bring your light upon me
    I知 ready to see you
    release the broken hearted
    I知 ready to see you
    heal the blind
    I know the times is now
    I知 not hesitating
    I知 just waiting on a sign
    If I am what I think
    Who will believe me?
    Why would they?
    I知 not special
    I知 so plain
    Would they ever accept me?
    For who I am
    Would they try to change me?
    Into something I知 not
    I知 starting to see everything so clear
    I知 not afraid anymore
    To become what I was born for
    Oh Lord,
    I don稚 need fame and
    all that it can bring
    I just want to live
    for all to be free
    I don稚 need fame and
    all that it can bring
    I just want to live
    For all to be freed




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      lynn,
    This piece of artistry comes deep within your spirit. You really put your heart and soul into it but I am sure you put your heart and soul into all your writtings. I truely enjoyed this. It is somewhat like a prayer/conversation. It is as if you were standing face to face with God talking to him eye ball to eye ball. You should try to get some of your writtings published. There is this writting contest on a website for writters called Academi.org. It is a England based website and the grand prize poetry winner will receive E5000. That is $12,000.00 in American Money. The deadline is January 26, 2005. Entry Forms are online or you can print them and mail them to the address given.
    | Posted on 2005-12-16 00:00:00 | by B-Gentle | [ Reply to This ]
      i really can relate to this poem because it is about how to find your true self ((am i right?)) i like your style of writing as well.
    | Posted on 2005-06-03 00:00:00 | by qtctgurl77 | [ Reply to This ]
      geat piece good vocals throughout one neve nos who they really are until its time to face your biggest challenge
    geat write and enjoyable read
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-06-03 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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