[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: freedots

    Author: lynn7
    ASL Info:    43/ St. Augustine, FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 419/288/103
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1052
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1114

       I wrote this about two years ago. I believe it's about
    me growing up or maturing with in the body of Christ.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    I知 starting to see everything so clear
    I知 not afraid anymore
    To become what I was born for
    Oh lord,
    How was I to know
    Correct me if I知 false
    I never want to misuse your word
    I never want to mislead
    Bring your light upon me
    I知 ready to see you
    release the broken hearted
    I知 ready to see you
    heal the blind
    I know the times is now
    I知 not hesitating
    I知 just waiting on a sign
    If I am what I think
    Who will believe me?
    Why would they?
    I知 not special
    I知 so plain
    Would they ever accept me?
    For who I am
    Would they try to change me?
    Into something I知 not
    I知 starting to see everything so clear
    I知 not afraid anymore
    To become what I was born for
    Oh Lord,
    I don稚 need fame and
    all that it can bring
    I just want to live
    for all to be free
    I don稚 need fame and
    all that it can bring
    I just want to live
    For all to be freed

    Submitted on 2005-06-03 14:56:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
    This piece of artistry comes deep within your spirit. You really put your heart and soul into it but I am sure you put your heart and soul into all your writtings. I truely enjoyed this. It is somewhat like a prayer/conversation. It is as if you were standing face to face with God talking to him eye ball to eye ball. You should try to get some of your writtings published. There is this writting contest on a website for writters called Academi.org. It is a England based website and the grand prize poetry winner will receive E5000. That is $12,000.00 in American Money. The deadline is January 26, 2005. Entry Forms are online or you can print them and mail them to the address given.
    | Posted on 2005-12-16 00:00:00 | by B-Gentle | [ Reply to This ]
      i really can relate to this poem because it is about how to find your true self ((am i right?)) i like your style of writing as well.
    | Posted on 2005-06-03 00:00:00 | by qtctgurl77 | [ Reply to This ]
      geat piece good vocals throughout one neve nos who they really are until its time to face your biggest challenge
    geat write and enjoyable read
    | Posted on 2005-06-03 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    new moon written by CrypticBard
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Fasade written by jackz
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    Push written by JanePlane
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    AI written by poetotoe
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    Before, Now, & After written by SincerWritinAsh
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    Wavelength written by saartha
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Bond written by saartha
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    Happy Saint Patrick's Day written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    4th of July written by layDsayD




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]