The Awakening -------------------------------------------
The heart forsaken
Drives deep into the ocean
Revoking all that was lost
Awakening the forgotten race
Cursed and banished
Rise O' heretics of the falsehood of mankind
Rise upon the desecrated sanctity that once bore
Rise upon eternity forever behold
And march against the army that shall provoke
Heroes those died in ancient times
Wizards' might that split the shore
Skies tumbling under the ground that stand
Warriors who tread upon the eldar's land
The autumn leaves gentle on grass’s eyes
Leading the path with no earthly ties
The icicle shards upon winter's throne
Snow caressing the frozen stone
The blackbird as it is flying south
Nights are grim and the days are dark
Fell creatures near the mountain pass
Fed by the fire where the old men lurk
Rise O' heretics of the falsehood of man
Raise the heroes from the ashes of sand
Hark! The wizards who know thy lore
Awaken the warriors with their bloodied swords
Raise the standards and banners of your time
Singing songs and tales of battle divine
The hulls and must lined upon each and every shore
And the armada once dead shall sail once more
I got the whole Lord of the Rings vibe from this poem. That's not a bad thing! And the way you wrote this made it sound like ancient times. I liked this poem, it gave the whole mystical vibe of war and somewhat revenge. My fave part was this one:
The heart forsaken Drives deep into the ocean Revoking all that was lost Awakening the forgotten race Cursed and banished
-and this one-
The autumn leaves gentle on grass’s eyes Leading the path with no earthly ties The icicle shards upon winter's throne Snow caressing the frozen stone
It was all very mystical feeling and it felt awesome! lol. great write, keep it up!
you are very talented! you have a true feeling of your writting and can put it into words almost perfectly. i liked this piece for the sake of it all coming to life right here. it was waking up at my fingertips.. my mind reeled with visions with every word. great job- jennifer