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    dots Submission Name: wanting your lovedots

    Author: mastermike
    ASL Info:    16/M/NC
    Elite Ratio:    2.68 - 24/31/6
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       this is about me wanting one of my past g/f's to realize how much i still love her and wanting her to show some sign that she still loves me too

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    dotswanting your lovedots

    I love you
    more than you may ever know
    and more than I can ever explain
    I just hope that someday
    you will be able to understand
    how I really feel about you
    through the power of nature
    and the peace in love
    that i wish will bless you
    each and everyday

    Submitted on 2005-06-04 13:39:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is so sweet and i have felt this way before... it only led to my heart being broken though. anyway it really touched my heart and i love how you just let out how you realy feel! its hard for some to accomplish that. keep it up and thanks for the comment! really touching!!! love it! how you described your feelings and wishes...very well written!
    | Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by Razorgirl | [ Reply to This ]
      This was really sweet, and though I mayself have never been in love I could really relate to this (though that sounds a bit strange) Hope to read more of your work someday
    | Posted on 2005-06-04 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]
      ok what can I say ..it;s ok ..you need to givea lettel care to the rhyme..and try to be more deep ..in your writing ..you can be good...
    | Posted on 2005-06-04 00:00:00 | by muhammed | [ Reply to This ]

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