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FUCKING you and HIM -------------------------------------------
This is driving me insane
but dying to scream out HIS name
"Close your eyes" you say
"And lets do some role play"
Shut my eyes go
And oooh all i'm seeing is how HE let himself flow
. . . on the tip of my breast
. . . across my chest
. . . gliding up my thighs
HE had me craving for these highs
This is driving me mad
I can't fuck with you
when i want HIM sooooo bad
F.ucking hell, girl. This was damn good. I loved loved loved the rhythm. Sexy. "I wish you were him" was good but a lot more sedate. You just pulled out all the stops for this one. Don't stop with all the hotness, baby. You make it all sound so *good*... even a gay girl can appreciate the sentiment.
DAMN!DAMN!DAMN!gIRL YOU ARE REALLY OUT THERE!I have never known some one to be so bold with their [censored].Excuse me for my cussing but the title just interested me.I read I wish you were HIM and that blew me away, but when I read this ,I am almost speechless.Now you are making me want to read some more of your poems.Here is the parts that I liked:
[censored]ing you but dying to scream out HIS name It was like you were ready to come out the closet that this other man is really blowing you away and he is not doing anything to ease your longing. Then when you said :
"Close your eyes" you say "And lets do some role play" Shut my eyes go And oooh all i'm seeing is how HE let himself flow I mean you are really trying to get your point across to this man that he can't do it like HIM even if he tries to role play.REally really really good write.You have took my breathe away.
This is truly wonderful. I could feel the frustration and anguish coming off the page. It is terrible indeed to be [censored] someone and wanting to make love to someone else. You make me remember when I was young and wish for that back just for a few hours. Great.