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    dots Submission Name: strongerdots
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    Author: bluecrane
    ASL Info:    19/F/WASHINGTON
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 70/83/26
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 887
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       i think it sux, but you probably get the point.


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    i'm over you, and you no longer control me
    my mind is my own, my life is mine again
    you never loved me, but i am alright now
    you cheated on me, but i can look at you and smile

    i can finally laugh at the memories
    instead of hurting
    loving you made me what i am today,
    stronger

    i will find the one who holds and loves me
    i will find the one that hurts when we are apart
    you will never know the meaning of love
    you were never meant to

    we are too different, and i am fine with that
    we can go our separate ways and never look back
    i will always know you showed me love
    you gave me courage to find the guy for me

    in a way i should thank you
    so i do, i thank you for teaching me to grow up
    good-bye, to you and the hurt you let me suffer




    Submitted on 2005-06-05 04:00:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      No it doesn't suck for a few reason,one you actually learn from it,second this was part of the healing process,thirdly your capture the real feeling of a person who was abuse and hurting.

    | Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      If you knew me, that feels like it would be pointed to me.:( Haha, I don't know the meaning of love. I've never had it.xD.
    Anyways, I like your poem some love break up angst in it. It's alright, needs a heading and a type.. Maybe some better grammar? I don't know I'm a grammar whore.
    | Posted on 2005-06-05 00:00:00 | by Abort_Chaotic | [ Reply to This ]
      This a cool poem about getting over :) And no it doesn't suc, it's nice in way with a undertone of regret in the last line. I quite liked it :)
    | Posted on 2005-06-05 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]


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