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    dots Submission Name: Essencedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 543
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 646



    Description:
       Happy Sonday!

    Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsEssencedots
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    The Past comes back
    & now I can smile
    with a fondness familiar
    but not haungtingly...
    glad 4 what was
    but isn't anymore

    The Future awaits
    & now I can smile
    with blessed anticipation
    but not expecting...
    eager 2 see more
    of what's in store

    The Now arrives
    & now I can smile
    with grateful appreciation
    but not 4 granted...
    of what life's for

    The All "IS"
    & now I can smile
    with gifted wisdom
    but not knowledge...
    of that I'm sure




    Submitted on 2005-06-05 12:00:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was charming - very clever and well put together. Do the
    #s have any signifacance?? 424 - any way I liked this alot.

    Steve
    | Posted on 2005-06-30 00:00:00 | by SHRINKSDR | [ Reply to This ]
      Anyone who is eager to see the future seems like a happy person. The comfortability with past, present and future is something im not very accumstomed to...do you cherish each moment in life? If so how do you get to be that way with that outlook? I only ask cause i'm the opposite in most ways. I would almost accuse people who are so happy of being in some kind of delusion but that just me. :)
    | Posted on 2005-06-05 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]
      The past, and the future, are both an important part of who we are. But the present is really all we have at this moment in which to do anything with.
    I found this to be an interesting read and I like the way you put it together. And at the end.. to accept that there is a higher power assisting us through it all. Unigue number usage in the stanzas. Nice write!
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-06-05 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      i realy lied this one,it was a story of the past future and present entertwining.and i thought it was lovely,my favorite line was:"glad 4 what was
    but isn't anymore"


    ?dreamer?
    | Posted on 2005-06-05 00:00:00 | by dreamer | [ Reply to This ]
      Bienvenue! (I hope I spelled that right :P): This was a very interesting write :), Remember the past, look forward to the futre, live the now :) All make up the grand ol' you :). At least that's the way in which I interpret this :) HAPPY HAPPY! JOY JOY!

    StW
    | Posted on 2005-06-05 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't look forward to anything, I know it's just going to bring pain and suffering in the long run.
    I don't think past is that critically important to us, we never REALLY learn from our mistakes, that's my opinion. This piece was good, but I didn't really relate to it. Sorry I couldn't relate. It could've used better grammar by the way.
    | Posted on 2005-06-05 00:00:00 | by Abort_Chaotic | [ Reply to This ]
      this was interesting piece. I didnt like the fact that your had numbers in there in place of words. It seemed very juvinelle and unprofessional. I like how everything is put together. This is an interesting view on the future although I think that this could stand to be a bit more clear. Altogether it was good, but could stand some work. Keep writing.
    | Posted on 2005-06-05 00:00:00 | by rockunsilenced | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this one. Very interesting, nothing like I've read before. The whole piece was put together very nicely, good flow and the wording was good, except when you used the numbers instead of the words. Other than that this was a very original piece of work. Good job!
    | Posted on 2005-06-06 00:00:00 | by Geraldine | [ Reply to This ]
      HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM...I wonder what inspired this one...HMMMMMMMM...
    hehe!
    HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!
    Excellent release of words...I like it!
    Happy that you can smile...and be smiled upon...repeatedly...
    | Posted on 2005-06-06 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]
      HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM...I wonder what inspired this one...HMMMMMMMM...
    hehe!
    HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!
    Excellent release of words...I like it!
    Happy that you can smile...and be smiled upon...repeatedly...
    | Posted on 2005-06-06 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiffany now this poem makes me smile...loved all of it... this is my favorite "The Now arrives
    & now I can smile
    with grateful appreciation
    but not 4 granted...
    of what life's for" pretty poem tiff
    `always write poetry, Cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-06-06 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]


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