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Undefinable Power

Author: Restless_Heart
Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 44 /35 /16
Words: 92
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
Total Views: 1030
Average Vote:    5.0000
Bytes: 655


I need a title, I like the work so I just need a title. Can anyone help.

Undefinable Power

I'm your worst nightmare,
I'm your bestfriend,
I'm everything you can't comprehend,
I am strong,
I am ruley,
I am everything and more.
I am no one you know and half the world population,
I am vindicated,
And educated,
I'm right, I swear I'm right,
I can't stand being wrong,
Unbeaten and unbeatable,
Strong with no chance of weakness.
I will not swallow any toxin, no poison will enter my body.
You can't kill the unkillable,
and I guess thats why you cannot kill me.

Copywritten 2005

Submitted on 2005-06-05 18:10:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i personally like this piece it speaks very loudly about how the phases of people or yourself can change at any given time. It is a truthful piece on how you can format or mold to what it is you are or choose to be because of someone or somebody.
I know the meaning of this and most would think spite but when you go trhough an ordeal like this and realize there is no changin it and you know you feel useless but you aren't.
this piece is very impowering and i love it very much

joe this is definately one of your bests keep it up you have a talent for this

Samm R
| Posted on 2005-06-05 00:00:00 | by Raven_s Miser | [ Reply to This ]
  i liked sounds like your both innocent and strong...maybe you could call itundefinable power or something like that...its going on my favorites!
| Posted on 2005-06-05 00:00:00 | by intoxicated411 | [ Reply to This ]

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