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    dots Submission Name: Undefinable Powerdots
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    Author: Restless_Heart
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 44/35/16
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 807
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 655



    Description:
       I need a title, I like the work so I just need a title. Can anyone help.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsUndefinable Powerdots
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    I'm your worst nightmare,
    I'm your bestfriend,
    I'm everything you can't comprehend,
    I am strong,
    I am ruley,
    I am everything and more.
    I am no one you know and half the world population,
    I am vindicated,
    And educated,
    I'm right, I swear I'm right,
    I can't stand being wrong,
    Unbeaten and unbeatable,
    Strong with no chance of weakness.
    I will not swallow any toxin, no poison will enter my body.
    You can't kill the unkillable,
    and I guess thats why you cannot kill me.


    Copywritten 2005




    Submitted on 2005-06-05 18:10:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i personally like this piece it speaks very loudly about how the phases of people or yourself can change at any given time. It is a truthful piece on how you can format or mold to what it is you are or choose to be because of someone or somebody.
    I know the meaning of this and most would think spite but when you go trhough an ordeal like this and realize there is no changin it and you know you feel useless but you aren't.
    this piece is very impowering and i love it very much

    joe this is definately one of your bests keep it up you have a talent for this

    Samm R
    | Posted on 2005-06-05 00:00:00 | by Raven_s Miser | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked this...it sounds like your both innocent and strong...maybe you could call itundefinable power or something like that...its going on my favorites!
    | Posted on 2005-06-05 00:00:00 | by intoxicated411 | [ Reply to This ]


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